I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Whaea Heather. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, June 11, 2021
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As his wings spanned wide, he soared above. The king of the sky. That's what he felt like, until.. He saw a different bird; it was a Pawakai. Pawakai are very big birds that can steal people and eat them. The eagle was confused so he flew closer to the powakai. The pouakai could see the eagle but the pouakai was trying to trap the eagle and eat it. The eagle was very smart because he flew far away from the pouakai but what the eagle did not know was that the pouakai had a trap so he could eat the eagle. The eagle is a fast bird he might be able to escape. The eagle got closer and the pouakai got closer.The pouakai stopped in the river to have a drink .The paukai led the eagle to his nest. The pouakai quickly flew and tried to get the eagle the eagle flew away and the pouakai chased the eagle the pouakai caught it then brun
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kia ora Narteiau I know you work hard and listin everytime not everytime just sometimes you do good thow from your friend Elifah
ReplyDeleteKia ora Narteiau.
ReplyDeleteI liked that your words took me into your story.They made me feel like I was there,watching the birds as they flew.
Is a powakai an actual bird or is it a myth?.